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Editorialist

Outside feedback — alpha reader, editor, or AI — becomes a controlled, scene-by-scene revision pass inside Obsidian.

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"Why? I'm not a refugee. My parents aren't refugees. What is wrong with me?" she says.

"Why? I'm not a refugee. My parents aren't refugees. What is wrong with me?" she says.

"Why? I'm not a refugee. My parents aren't refugees. What is wrong with me?" she says.

The controlled sweep

An integrated revision pass

Each suggestion lands beside the exact manuscript line. Compare the original with a proposed revision, read the editor’s reasoning, then decide what belongs in your draft.

01

Compare in context

Original and revised copy stay together, with an exact-match check before anything can move.

02

Understand the why

The rationale travels with the suggestion, so you never have to reconstruct it from a chat transcript.

03

Rewrite in your voice

Adopt the idea, change the wording, defer it, or move on. The manuscript changes only when you act.

The same review format works for AI, editors, and beta readers.

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Original

“Why? I’m not a refugee. My parents aren’t refugees. What is wrong with me?” she says.

“Why? I’m not a refugee. My parents aren’t refugees. What is wrong with me?” she says.

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Revised

“Why? I’m not a refugee. My parents aren’t refugees. What is wrong with me?” Siddy says, half to herself. Then she shakes it off.

“Why? I’m not a refugee. My parents aren’t refugees. What is wrong with me?” Siddy says, half to herself. Then she shakes it off.

Why

Speaker ambiguity—sandwiched between Shail-focused lines, “she says” reads as Shail, and the line echoes Shail’s own identity anxiety so closely a reader will misattribute it. Naming Siddy keeps the plant and motivates her pivot back to warning Shail.

Speaker ambiguity—sandwiched between Shail-focused lines, “she says” reads as Shail, and the line echoes Shail’s own identity anxiety so closely a reader will misattribute it. Naming Siddy keeps the plant and motivates her pivot back to warning Shail.

Exact match found in the manuscript.

Claude-fable-5 • AI editor

Fable 5 • AI editor

Mark as rewritten

Mark as rewritten

What Editorialist does

Bring your own editor

Editorialist doesn’t ship an AI — it ships a format. Copy the review instructions and your scene into whatever model you trust: the chatbot subscription you already pay for, at full strength. Paste the formatted response back, and the review sweep begins. No API key, no per-token bill, no model lock-in — and it works identically with a human editor or beta reader. Editorial judgment is frontier-model work: use the strongest model you have.

Nothing applies until you act

Suggestions append as review blocks below the scene, and the sweep walks them one by one: accept, reject, defer — or rewrite the line as something entirely your own. In-session undo, with conservative matching so nothing lands on the wrong text.

Cut files: never lose a line

One click backs a line up before anything changes. Attached meta-data provides context.

Editorialisms

Manuscript-wide structural checklists with scene-aware highlighting and revision-effort estimates.

Radial Timeline® synergy

Pending edits and Inquiry follow-ups flow straight into the review sweep, scene by scene, with the Inquiry brief shown in the toolbar. Works standalone too.

Contributor stats

Per-contributor acceptance rates and strengths profiles across your revision history.

Direct model connections are planned — the format already works with anything.

Radial Timeline and Editorialist working together in Obsidian
Radial Timeline and Editorialist working together in Obsidian

Better together

In the Radial Timeline workflow, Editorialist is the revision half: pending edits and Inquiry follow-ups from Radial Timeline flow straight into the review sweep, and every accepted line lands back in the manuscript — right where the prose lives. No plugin lock-in either: Editorialist works standalone, with any manuscript and any feedback source.

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